All alone

In my writing I`m trying to use more punctuation and better language so I can improve in my writing

All alone

 

One day I was voted to be printed on a billboard on the road to nowhere. It was quite lonely on the 10 by 6 billboard. For the past few years I’ve been very sad since the day I got glued to the rusty, mouldy billboard.

There's been only 4 cars on the road to nowhere for the past few years because no one likes leaving town. The reason that most people don't leave town is because they don’t get all the fancy shops in other places and they can't take their fancy  rich pets into the shops in other places. Finally on the fourth year I managed to get off this billboard.

At first I thought I was staying on a different billboard.  But then I found out that I was going to the hillsdale mall. Finally I was in a warm building. But instead of hanging off a wire I got stuck on the floor with muddy, grassy, wet shoes rubbed all over my face and body.

But 6.5 weeks later I finally got pulled off the floor and hung on a window frame for the rest of my life.. To live happily ever after

By Kieran