Tuesday, 13 June 2017

Show dont tell ww1

Soldier sadness
One nasty & bloody fighting day in the trench. Along time ago, it was mayhem. They were defending their country`s trench. They had no food because the kitchen man had been shot dead by the german gun fire. For the past 7 hours the swiss had been fighting the germans, so far the germans had been winning side but suddenly the swiss came back at them with cannon fire GeT  DOWN shouted the german leader there's a bomb. When the bomb hit the ground there was a crackling sound, then a massive BANG it all turned bad for the germans. Over 350 men died that`s including the leader now the germans only have 153 men left while the swiss still have over 800 men left. So the only thing that the germans could do was surrender with the white flag and hope nothing goes wrong from this point, but if anything did happen both sides were ready to fire.

    



By Kieran

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